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Like in any writing sentences are important. Long sentences can be too convoluted and become less readable. The trick is to know how to shorten long sentences and turn them into functional components that are simple. This is exactly what we will be looking at this week in the fourth chapter of Cappon’s The Associated Press Guide to News Writing : The Case for the Period. This chapter focuses on the importance of directness for sentences in news writing. Cappon admits that there is not really a limit on how many words make a perfect sentence. Cappon states that when a sentence length climbs above 20 words the writer risks making the sentence convoluted to the readers. However, he does believe the sweet spot length of a sentence is about 16 to 20 words.   Cappon again tells the reader the importance of creating a transparent message in their writing. This time he does it by expressing the importance of having short sentences that get straight to the point. Cappon succeeds in te

For every news story there is a lead. It is one of the most important parts of a news story. It is the hook that lures the reader into the story. This is exactly what we will be looking at this week in the third chapter of Cappon’s The Associated Press Guide to News Writing: Leads: The Agony of Square One. This chapter focuses on the importance of leads. Cappon states that a lead must be clear and specific. Cappon compares a lead to a speech, in that it shouldn’t mumble. A neews lead must be loud and clear, so it can speak directly to the reader and captivate their attention. Cappon shows a lot of examples in what are good and bad news leads in this chapter. Again, in this chapter we see that Cappon stresses the importance of simplicity and clarity in news writing. Cappon succeeds in teaching the reader the importance of writing good news leads in this chapter. Cappon also succeeds in continuing his overarching message in his book within this chapter. Overall this was an exce

For a reporter to report effectively you need more than just information. This week will we be looking at chapter 2 of Cappon’s The Associated Press Guide to News Writing : Information Is Not Enough. In this chapter Cappon talks about how reports made by journalists need to be not only reliable but also compelling enough to withstand the competition of the news industry. Cappon writes that reporters need to make stories simple, concise and most of all include only the important details. Stories must not contain fluff they need to get straight to the point and the heart of the story. Much like in the last chapter Cappon conveys the importance of sentence structure and the importance of having a transparent message. The second chapter of the Associated Press Guide to News Writing is a follow-up to the first chapter. It continues the message Cappon stated in the first chapter in that all news writing should aim for simplicity and directness. Cappon continues that message by expa

The Be an Editor Game is a simulation game on Newsu.org. The game is to help give you the feel of what it is like to be a managing editor for a newspaper. The game is an interactive video. that is pre-recorded with actors who are acting as section editors. Yours job in this simulator is to listen to the pitch of each section editor and choose two of the best stories from the four sections to put into your news budget for the next newspaper.  The game itself is rather easy. The game tells you what your audience is and what they want. So as an editor in this simulator you want to choose the big head turner stories. On my first try I got the two best story choices when I published the article. It was a no brainer that the top story choices in the simulator would be the Fire at the Cheese Factory and  the Johnson Dam Water Rising. The game while easy does a good job of conveying how the workplace of a newspaper office would be like. While the acting of the section editors was hok